The old farmhouse (Friday Fictioneers)

image

Image by Mary Shipman

‘But the man said you shouldn’t go in the old farmhouse, Justin…’

‘Our one source of light and warmth is about burn out, we have no more firewood and it’s going to be a cold night. There’s bound to be some old planks in the farmhouse we can use.’

‘Don’t you think it looks kinda spooky?’

‘It’s just because it’s getting dark. You don’t believe in all that paranormal stuff do you?’

‘Well…’

‘Look, you can stay here. I’ll go have a look around and be right back.’

‘OK.’

Pause.

‘Justin?’

Pause.

‘Justin!?’

Pause.

Then… darkness.

************

Friday Fictioneers is a challenge set by Rochelle Fields where writers around the world create 100 word stories inspired by the one image. For more information see: http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/06/18/18-june-2014-summer-rerun/

13 Comments

Filed under Friday Fictioneers

13 responses to “The old farmhouse (Friday Fictioneers)

  1. Right from the first “but the man said you shouldn’t go” I was yelling at them not to go. Very suspenseful, Jessie.

  2. MrBinks

    JUUUUSSSSTTTTIIINNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!??!!!

  3. I always yell at people in horror movie – Don’t go there, don’t go there…but I suspect I would be the first to go. Reason over superstition might not prove reasonable every time. Great story.

  4. Uh oh. Ghosts or zombies? Either way, he should have followed the only sensible words ever uttered in a teen horror flick: “Don’t go in there!”

  5. Justin, I suspect, is now toast. Nice one.

  6. Yes, Justin is either a Zombie, a Vampire, a Ghost, a Werewolf, or some un-Holy being. Good story – he should have listened. Good story! Nan πŸ™‚

  7. Spooooooky!! Loved it! πŸ™‚

  8. Yikes! Don’t go into the farmhouse…. Don’t… Well, done.

  9. Must be a farmhouse with a big appetite. Nice one.

  10. He should’ve listened! Well done! Scary!

  11. Jessie, I figure a zombie, werewolf, etc. wouldn’t wait until someone entered, so it’s probably a ghost. They’re often less aggressive.–at least in the stories. It’s possible, as Subroto suggested, that the house was evil and absorbed him somehow. O_o People in horror stories tend to be poor listeners and suffer for it. Well written. πŸ™‚ —Susan

  12. No ghosts. No zombies. No vampires. I think he simply fell through a hole in the rotten floor. Or is that not as fun? πŸ™‚ Great story; well written.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s